No growth of moor or coppice, No heather-flower or vine, But bloomless buds of poppies, Green grapes of Proserpine, Pale beds of blowing rushes Where no leaf blooms or blushes Save this whereout she crushes For dead men deadly wine.
By Algernon Charles Swinburne
baised off of the style of Art Nouveau painter Alphonse Mucha
I really like your style and the way you colour Um, one thing I noticted though is the space between the P and the R. Personally, I think it kind of makes the the image seem a bit unbalanced, even though you added the mark to the other side. I don't know how you'd change that though.
Also, it appears that the light source is coming from the left, yes? If so, then some of the lighing and shading is a bit off, methinks. For example, I think you could shade more on her knee where her dress falls over, and darken the back of the dress.
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Also, it appears that the light source is coming from the left, yes? If so, then some of the lighing and shading is a bit off, methinks. For example, I think you could shade more on her knee where her dress falls over, and darken the back of the dress.
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"I suppose we can at least prove that we're alive in the present. Unfortunately, the present doesn't last more than an instant before becoming the past" -~SuperMaids
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This is your life and it's ending one minute at a time
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